5.8.08

HERE IS SOME ADVANCE-PRAISE FROM A WEB EDITOR WHO READ ONE OF THE PIECES FROM MY BOOK THAT I SENT OUT

Hi,

Thank you for your submission. Unfortunately I've decided to pass on your story. The first line was very intriguing, but the piece ultimately turned into a very confusing, unsettling mix of adult content, violence, childishness, and innocence. I found it a little difficult to read.

Best wishes,

(_________)

12 comments:

ryan manning said...

the asian tommy chong

KEN BAUMANN said...

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED

sam pink said...

i like to be alive. it is so much fun.

gena said...

but all those things make up your charm

Alicia Pernell said...

perfect.

BLAKE BUTLER said...

haha which one of themz googooz sold ya that stank

daryl said...

this is ellen st. frances, and i like it

PAPER HERO PRESS said...

that shit is yucky yo.

jereme said...

'encouragement'

yes.

thank you editor

you are god

and we are but lowly insects

sam pink said...

ultra yucky.

Anonymous said...

The Asian Pat Morita.

albie

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